Writing also counts you know...
You all of already proven that you can animate, but, animation is only part of what makes something "good." If you are going to make a prodigy, atleast come up with something original thats funny to an audience above twelve. It's cool that all of you were able to get together and do this but why make a bunch of short incomplete movies instead of just one? The writing was just very weak and it was almost like i was watching the matrix frame by frame and then could quickly tell where the writers stopped the copy and attempted to make something original.
It was good overall but way too long. The beginning should have gone faster to get into the actual plot. The dick joke thing was funny until it just keep going and going and going. Theres no need to repeat the same joke so many times, it just makes the orginal joke less funny. Very nice job though.
I enjoyed your drawing skills and attention to detail with the main character. The camera angels were nice and isnt something most people here are able to do. Nice.
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